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Draft paragraph: The new school cafeteria is designed with sustainability in mind. Solar panels on the roof will generate clean energy for lighting and equipment. The kitchen will use local ingredients to reduce transportation costs and support nearby farms. Students will have access to recycling stations throughout the dining area. Additionally, the cafeteria will feature compostable plates and utensils made from biodegradable materials.
Which revision would best improve the clarity and flow of this paragraph?
Which revision would best improve the clarity and flow of this paragraph?