PSAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors
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Example Question #251 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Each of the scientists on the team came to their own conclusion; in the end, there was no clear conclusion to the study. No error
was
their own
No error
conclusion
to the study
their own
Look here for pronoun agreement: "each" is a singular subject and requires a corresponding singular pronoun. The correct pronoun would be "his," "her," or "his or her," rather than "their."
Example Question #252 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Wooly mammoths, an extinct species of elephant, certainly deserved its name—a newborn calf could weigh 200 pounds! No error
its name
species of elephant
could weigh
newborn
No error
its name
In this sentence, the pronoun “its” does not agree in number with its antecedent “Wooly mammoths.” The corrected sentence reads: Wooly mammoths, an extinct species of elephant, certainly deserved their name—a newborn calf could weigh 200 pounds!
Example Question #32 : Identifying Pronoun Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The North American moose population has declined, but their cultural popularity in everything from children’s books to hip t-shirts has grown. No error
No error
moose
their
from children’s books to hip t-shirts
has declined
their
In this sentence the plural pronoun “their” refers to the singular subject “moose population.” The singular pronoun should be used instead. The corrected sentence reads: The North American moose population has declined, but its cultural popularity in everything from children’s books to hip t-shirts has grown.
Example Question #33 : Identifying Pronoun Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Mitosis is a process when cells undergo division in order to create two new cells. No error
is
undergo
No error
when
to create
when
When describing a idea, concept, or process, we refer to it with the phrase "in which." Mitosis is not a time when cells undergo division, but rather a process in which cells undergo division.
Example Question #34 : Identifying Pronoun Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
For we, it is easier to get around in public transportation than it is to drive a car on roads that are congested and stress-inducing. No error
No error
than
are
we
to
we
"We" is a subject pronoun. The object pronoun is "us." In the sentence above, it is easier to get around for "we," which is incorrect. To correct the sentence, "we" should be changed to "us."
Example Question #62 : Identifying Word Usage Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Although a sales tax may appear to be an efficient way to raise profits, they are more detrimental to low-income consumers than to rich ones. No error
ones
they are
to raise
No error
than to
they are
"Tax" is a singular antecedent, while the pronoun and verb "they are" are plural. "It is" should be used instead of "they are" so that a singular pronoun and verb correspond to the singular antecedent "tax."
Example Question #63 : Identifying Word Usage Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The cake was decorated with turquoise frosting swirls and turquoise candles because these were his favorite color. No error
was decorated with
frosting swirls
his
No error
these were
these were
“These” refers to “turquoise,” which is singular. The pronoun should likewise be singular. The corrected sentence reads, "The cake was decorated with turquoise frosting swirls and turquoise candles because this was his favorite color."
Example Question #35 : Identifying Pronoun Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Imported turmeric, often valued for it’s exotic flavor, also has the health benefit of helping to prevent the mental deterioration of older adults. No error
No error
it's
mental deterioration
flavor
older adults
it's
"It's" is an abbreviated form of "it is." "Its" is the possessive form of "it," and therefore "it's" is the part of the sentence that contains an error.
Example Question #36 : Identifying Pronoun Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Ginger is valued not only because of its flavorful properties as a spice and garnish, but also because they have significant health benefits. No error
No error
they
not only
but also
flavorful properties
they
"Ginger" is singular, therefore the pronoun that refers to it in the sentence, "they," should be singular as well. The pronoun "they" is used with plural antecedents, and should be changed to the pronoun "it," which is used with singular neuter antecedents.
Example Question #37 : Identifying Pronoun Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The committee had a tradition of voting bimonthly for their quarterly meeting, in which the members discussed important matters. No error
No error
their
discussed
had
in which
their
This is a pronoun agreement error. "Committee" is a group noun, so it is singular. The pronoun "their" refers to the committee but it is plural. "Their" should become "its."
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