PSAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #391 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The Federalists and the Republicans, the first two political parties of the United States, disagreed with how the Constitution should be interpretedNo error

Possible Answers:

No error

political

with

should be interpreted

of the United States

Correct answer:

with

Explanation:

The wrong preposition is used in "disagreed with." You generally "disagree with" a person or policy, but "disagree over" or "disagree on" an issue. Changing "with" to "over" corrects the sentence's error. The corrected sentence reads "The Federalists and the Republicans, the first two political parties of the United States government, disagreed over how the Constitution should be interpreted."

Example Question #392 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Her father prevented her against dropping out of high schoolNo error

Possible Answers:

Her father

prevented her

of high school

against

No error

Correct answer:

against

Explanation:

The correct phrase is “to prevent someone (or something) from doing something.” 

Example Question #393 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The two sides were not prepared to compromise with the matter of wage increases, and the discussions came to a standstillNo error

Possible Answers:

were

to compromise with 

No error

and the discussions

came to a standstill

Correct answer:

to compromise with 

Explanation:

This sentence does not use prepositions in the correct idiomatic matter. You compromise on an issue and with people. The corrected sentence reads, "The two sides were not prepared to compromise on the matter of wage increases, and the discussions came to a standstill."

Example Question #394 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Joseph was apprehensive by the unusual number of television crews crowding his front lawnNo error

Possible Answers:

by the unusual number

his front lawn

was

crowding

No error

Correct answer:

by the unusual number

Explanation:

This sentence uses the wrong coordinator to connect its different parts. An adjective like “apprehensive” calls for “because” to explain why. The corrected sentence reads, "Joseph was apprehensive because of the unusual number of television crews crowding his front lawn."

Example Question #395 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Now that I have researched all of the candidates and the issues, I have decided to support for the third party candidate. No error

Possible Answers:

support for

have decided

and

No error

all of the

Correct answer:

support for

Explanation:

In this sentence, the preposition “for” is incorrect. “For” is used after the noun “support,” but not the verb. The corrected sentence reads, "Now that I have researched all of the candidates and the issues, I have decided to support the third party candidate."

Example Question #396 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The presence of a chicken happily pecking at pretzels strewn across her kitchen floor was rather surprising for Margaret. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

surprising for

strewn

happily

was

Correct answer:

surprising for

Explanation:

There is an error in the idiomatic use of prepositions in this sentence. The preposition “to” is more acceptable after “surprising.” The corrected sentence reads: The presence of a chicken happily pecking at pretzels strewn across her kitchen floor was rather surprising to Margaret.

Example Question #397 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Half of the students in the class stayed up all night in order to work in the questions that confused them the most. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

work in

confused

most

of the students

Correct answer:

work in

Explanation:

"In" is the wrong preposition. "Work on" makes more sense.

Example Question #398 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Inspired for the delicious quiche that he tried in a French bakery last weekend, Marvin went on a organic vegetable shopping spree and tried to recreate the perfect breakfast in his own kitchenNo error

Possible Answers:

and

No error

Inspired for

that he tried

in his own kitchen

Correct answer:

Inspired for

Explanation:

This sentence uses the wrong preposition after “inspired.” “By” would be idiomatically correct. The corrected sentence reads, "Inspired by the delicious quiche that he tried in a French bakery last weekend, Marvin went on a organic vegetable shopping spree and tried to recreate the perfect breakfast in his own kitchen."

Example Question #324 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Secretly delighted that the prank, the author admonished his friends for giving him such a fright. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

delighted that

admonished

giving

Secretly

Correct answer:

delighted that

Explanation:

The correct idiomatic preposition after “delighted” in this context would be “by.” The corrected sentence reads, "Secretly delighted by the prank, the author admonished his friends for giving him such a fright."

Example Question #325 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

 

While his style was initially a protest to painting, Jackson Pollock's brand of artistic expression is now widespread and has influenced many other artists. No error

Possible Answers:

widespread

traditional painting

No error

has influenced

protest to

Correct answer:

protest to

Explanation:

As a general rule for prepositions, "protest" is accompanied by the preposition "against," not "to." Therefore, "protest to" contains an error. 

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