PSAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #511 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The rules posted in the lobby is intended to be guidelines only. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

intended to be

posted

guidelines

is

Correct answer:

is

Explanation:

The subject of this sentence is plural ("rules"), but the verb "is" agrees with a singular subject. Changing "is" to "are" corrects the sentence's error. The corrected sentence reads, "The rules posted in the lobby are intended to be guidelines only."

Example Question #512 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The frequency with which her father was bringing home bushels of raw beets were concerning to Kathy. No error

Possible Answers:

with which

No error

were concerning

was bringing home

raw

Correct answer:

were concerning

Explanation:

In this sentence, the verb “were” does not agree with the singular subject “frequency.” The corrected sentence reads, "The frequency with which her father was bringing home bushels of raw beets was concerning to Kathy."

Example Question #513 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The rhododendrons and lilacs that line the garden path seems out of place in the shadow of the concrete structureNo error

Possible Answers:

No error

rhododendrons and lilacs

in the shadow

structure

seems

Correct answer:

seems

Explanation:

In this sentence, the verb does not agree with the subject. The subject “rhododendrons and lilacs” is plural, but “seems” agrees with a singular noun. The corrected sentence reads, "The rhododendrons and lilacs that line the garden path seem out of place in the shadow of the concrete structure."

Example Question #514 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

My doctor told me to spend more time gardening, watching movies, and playing board games, because doing things that make me feel good are actually good for my health. No error

Possible Answers:

playing

feel good

are

actually good

No error

Correct answer:

are

Explanation:

The subject here is the singular gerund (verbal noun) "doing"—not the plural noun "things." Thus, the main verb should be the singular—"is," not "are."

Example Question #515 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

A spread, such as honey or syrup, are often used to sweeten pancakes and give them more flavor. No error

Possible Answers:

them

sweeten

or

No error

are often 

Correct answer:

are often 

Explanation:

The subject of the sentence is "spread," which is being used as a singular noun; however, the sentence's verb, "are," agrees with plural nouns, not singular ones. To correct the sentence's error, "are" should be changed to "is."

Example Question #516 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Massage and physical therapy helps to alleviate pain for many individuals who otherwise would suffer chronically from their conditions. No error

Possible Answers:

from 

would

for

helps

No error

Correct answer:

helps

Explanation:

The subject in this sentece is "Massage and physical therapy." Because the sentence's subject consists of multiple nouns connected by the conjunction "and," it is a compound subject; compound subjects take plural verbs, so "helps," which agrees with singular nouns, is incorrect. The corresponding verb should be "help," not "helps."

Example Question #517 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The politician, along with his many constituents, are opposed to the new reforms being enacted by the government. No error

Possible Answers:

opposed to

being enacted

constituents, are

No error

along with

Correct answer:

constituents, are

Explanation:

It is easy to think that the verb "are" refers to "constituents," but in this case ("The politician, along with his many constituents, are . . ."), the verb refers back to "politician," since "along with his many constituents" is a prepositional phrase. So, the plural verb "are" is incorrect since it refers to the singular "politician," and should be replaced with the singular verb "is." The corrected sentence reads, "The politician, along with his many constituents, is opposed to the new reforms being enacted by the government."

Example Question #518 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

While I don't mind training on the school track, running on trails in our town's local parks are my favorite workout. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

are

in our town's

on

While

Correct answer:

are

Explanation:

Don't be confused here by the plural nouns "trails" and "parks"—neither of these is the subject of the sentence's main clause; they merely add information about the subject. "Running," may initially seem to be a verb, but here it is functioning as a gerund, a verbal ending in "-ing" that functions as a noun. As such, it is a singular subject and needs to take the singular verb "is," making "are" incorrect.

Example Question #519 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Rabbits spend more time caring for their young than does other types of rodents such as hamsters and gerbils. No error

Possible Answers:

spend

than does

No error

caring

such as

Correct answer:

than does

Explanation:

The verb "does" is used with singular nouns, but in the sentence as it is written, it refers to "types," a plural noun. To correct the sentence's error, we would need to change "does" to "do," or omit "do" completely, as just the "than" is sufficient to make the comparison.

Example Question #520 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The two families developed their farms in friendly competition and eventually became the leader of the region’s dairy productionNo error

Possible Answers:

No error

the region's dairy production

the leader

their

friendly

Correct answer:

the leader

Explanation:

This sentence is about two families (plural) that are successful. The sentence has them becoming the leader (singular) in the region. This discrepancy in number is an error. The corrected sentence reads: The two families developed their farms in friendly competition and eventually became the leaders of the region’s dairy production.

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