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Example Question #11 : Correcting Verb Mood Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
So that Marie could get additional practice, Marie's tutor recommended that she look at additional practice questions.
looked
may look
will look
look
looks
look
The phrase “Marie's tutor recommended that Marie look” contains the present-tense subjunctive verb “look,” and it is right as it is. This is because the subjunctive mood is used after expressions like “recommend that” and “advise that” to express someone's wishes and desires. “Looks,” “looked,” and “will look” are all in the indicative mood, so they are not correct.
Example Question #12 : Correcting Verb Mood Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
If I was you, I wouldn't go jogging after dark.
might be
was
were
would be
am
were
This sentence expresses a counterfactual statement, or a statement that does not match the way things are in reality. It is not actually the case that the narrator is the person she is talking to. Counterfactual sentences use subjunctive verbs. So, we need to change the verb “was,” which is in the indicative, to its subjunctive form, “were.”
Example Question #13 : Correcting Verb Mood Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The boss requests that one of his employees stands at the side of the road with a sign to attract more customers to the business.
ought to stand
stands
may stand
stand
to stand
stand
Here, the words “requests that” introduce a phrase that requires the subjunctive mood. The subjunctive is used after phrases like “requires that” or “requests that” to express the wishes and desires of the person doing the requesting. In this sentence, the verb “stands” is in the indicative mood, but it should be changed to its subjunctive form, “stand.”
Example Question #14 : Correcting Verb Mood Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
His mother wants him to be prepared for the spelling bee; she requires that he studies spelling for two hours every day.
study
would study
studies
will study
must be studying
study
Here, the words “requires that” introduce a phrase that requires the subjunctive mood. The subjunctive is used after phrases like “requires that” or “requests that” to express the wishes and desires of the person doing the requesting. In this sentence, the verb “studies” is in the indicative mood, but it should be changed to its subjunctive form, “study.”
Example Question #15 : Correcting Verb Mood Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Bob's mother told me that Bob is very intelligent and that he be committed to studying for at least two hours every day.
be committed
being committed
commit
is committed
commit himself
is committed
This sentence uses the subjunctive verb “be” in the phrase “he be committed”; however, in the way the sentence is written, this phrase was spoken by Bob's mother, who believes it to be true. It's not part of a phrase that expresses any kind of wish, desire, or counterfactual statement. To Bob's mother, the idea that Bob is committed to studying for two hours is a true fact about the world. Therefore, this fact should be expressed using the indicative mood, not the subjunctive. We should change the subjunctive verb “be” to its indicative form, “is.”
Example Question #16 : Correcting Verb Mood Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Because it was raining, the students had recess inside the classroom; but, if the weather had been nice, they go outside for recess.
go
were going
would have gone
had gone
would go
would have gone
The second part of this sentence expresses a counterfactual statement. It is describing what might have happened if the weather had been nice; however, we know that in reality, it was raining. Since counterfactual statements use the subjunctive mood, we need to change the indicative verb “go” to a past-tense subjunctive form, “would have gone.” We know that the subjunctive form has to be in the past tense because the conditional is talking about what might have happened in the past.
Example Question #17 : Correcting Verb Mood Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Were you to have chosen that restaurant, we would have to dress up.
Were you to have chosen
Was you to chose
Were you to chose
Were you to choose
Was you to choose
Were you to choose
This sentence is an example of the present subjunctive, which is most commonly used in English to express hypothetical situations, wishes, and desires. The correct long form of the sentence is “if you were to choose that restaurant,” and “were you to choose that restaurant” is simply an inversion and shortening of the long form. (“Were you to have chosen that restaurant” is the past subjunctive, which doesn’t match the future conditional form of the second half of the sentence.)
Example Question #18 : Correcting Verb Mood Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
It is necessary that Danielle knows what time she is being picked up.
Danielle knowed what time she is being picked up
Danielle knows what time she is being picked up
Danielle know what time she was being picked up
Danielle known what time she is being picked up
Danielle know what time she is being picked up
Danielle know what time she is being picked up
The subjunctive verb mood is used when sentences express conditions contrary to fact, or as in this case, in clauses that contain an order or a recommendation. The correct version of this sentence reads: "It is necessary that Danielle know what time she is being picked up."
Example Question #1922 : Sat Writing
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
I like to think that if I was king, I would be a fair and just ruler.
were
would
was
wasn't
be
were
The word "if" at the beginning of the sentence indicates that the sentence is an indicator that the sentence is in the subjunctive mood. Given that the sentence is subjunctive, the word "was" should be replaced by "were."
Example Question #1923 : Sat Writing
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
I wish that school were out for the summer, but it isn't.
weren't
be
were
wasn't
was
were
The first part of the sentence indicates that the sentence is a wish, therefore, the sentence is in subjunctive mood. "Were" is the correct verb to use with "school" when using the subjunctive mood.
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