SAT Writing : SAT Writing

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #1281 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

She aspired to someday live in Barcelona, learn Spanish, and traveling through the country. No error

Possible Answers:

someday

traveling

No error

live in

through

Correct answer:

traveling

Explanation:

This sentence has a problem with parallelism. The items in the list should be formatted the same. The corrected sentence reads, "She aspired to someday live in Barcelona, learn Spanish, and travel through the country."

Example Question #1282 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

When I was much younger I was very energetic, but now I nap often, watch a lot of television, tired, and rarely work out. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

much younger

tired

often

rarely

Correct answer:

tired

Explanation:

All of the items in this poor tired fellow's list of activities need to be in the same form. Yet we find three verbs ("nap," "watch," and "work out") and one adjective ("tired"). Thus, the adjective is the odd one out and needs to be changed (to something like "am always tired").

Example Question #1283 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

That performance has been seen by more people than any musical made in the past decade. No error

Possible Answers:

than

in

has been seen

No error

any musical

Correct answer:

any musical

Explanation:

The word "other" should be included in a comparison of one thing with a group, so the correct phrase is "any other musical" and "any musical" contains the sentence's error.

Example Question #1284 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The class project consisted of forming groups, discussing questions about the novel, and give a presentation in front of the class. No error

Possible Answers:

in front of

give

No error

consisted of

groups

Correct answer:

give

Explanation:

"Give" is the wrong verb tense. To achieve parallelism, it should be "giving."

Example Question #1285 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The town fell into chaos and confusion; people fled from their homes and running blindly into obstacles. No error

Possible Answers:

their

No error

running

confusion; people

fell into

Correct answer:

running

Explanation:

This sentence has a problem with verb tense and parallelism. Since the “fled” and “running” are coordinated with a conjunction, they should be formatted in the same way. The corrected sentence reads, "The town fell into chaos and confusion; people fled from their homes and ran blindly into obstacles."

Example Question #1286 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Ultimately, he concluded that having a surprise party on a gloomy day was better than his birthdayNo error

Possible Answers:

No error

gloomy

concluded that having

than his birthday

on

Correct answer:

than his birthday

Explanation:

This sentence does not compare between two like things. The two sides of the comparison should be formatted in a parallel way. The corrected sentence reads, "Ultimately, he concluded that having a surprise party on a gloomy day was better than one on his birthday."

Example Question #41 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Having my uncle over for dinner is never much fun; he talks loudly, makes rude comments, and, although the food is always delicious, complaining is constant about the quality of what we eat. No error

Possible Answers:

complaining is constant

Having

No error

talks loudly

what we eat

Correct answer:

complaining is constant

Explanation:

The clause "although the food is always delicious" might distract some people into missing the paralellism used, because it is set apart by commas. Considering "talks" and "makes," we see the present form of some verbs used in succession. For the best sentence structure, the final action should also follow the normal present verb form, like "talks" and "makes." "Complaining is constant" does not follow this, and so (C) contains the error. It would be best to say "complains constantly" or something similar.

Example Question #42 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

It will rain tomorrow, so I will jog in the park, practice soccer, and playing baseball in my backyard today. No error

Possible Answers:

playing

No error

I

will rain tomorrow

will

Correct answer:

playing

Explanation:

This is a parallelism error. The verbs "jog" and "practice" begin the parallel elements in the sentence, and they are each in present tense. The verb "playing" should also be in present tense so that it matches "jog" and "practice." So, "playing" should be "play."

Example Question #43 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

There are two things Jean knows how to do well: how to cook and mountain-climbingNo error

Possible Answers:

knows

how to

mountain-climbing

are

No error

Correct answer:

mountain-climbing

Explanation:

The sentence needs to remain parallel. If it had said "cooking," "mountain-climbing" would be ok.

Example Question #43 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

At the deli, the sandwiches are very similar to the cafeteria, except they are slightly larger and contain less fat. No error

Possible Answers:

except

No error

similar to the cafeteria

slightly larger

less fat

Correct answer:

similar to the cafeteria

Explanation:

This is a faulty comparison. "Sandwiches" cannot be compared to a cafeteria. Use "similar to those at the cafeteria" or something like that instead to correct the sentence's error.

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