SAT Writing : SAT Writing

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #57 : Identifying Pronoun Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

One should never allow your work responsibilities to be taken over by another person. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

your

should never

another

to be taken over

Correct answer:

your

Explanation:

In this sentence, the pronouns do not stay consistent. It starts out with the subject “one” and changes to the possessive “your,” but these should refer to the same thing. The corrected sentence reads, "One should never allow one’s work responsibilities to be taken over by another person."

Example Question #232 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

One cannot see the conditions in a sweatshop and truthfully say you think they are acceptable work conditions for any human being. No error

Possible Answers:

One

No error

they

any

truthfully

Correct answer:

One

Explanation:

The subject of the sentence is not consistent throughout the sentence.  At the beginning of the sentence, it refers to "one" but later changes to "you."  As changing the word "you" that is used later in the sentence is not an option, "one" is the incorrect word in this sentence. The sentence should read, "You cannot see the conditions in a sweatshop and truthfully say you think they are acceptable work conditions for any human being."

Example Question #61 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

One might try to adopt a baby lion, but you should be prepared for it to become quite ferocious when it grows up. No error

Possible Answers:

might try

when

it

No error

you

Correct answer:

you

Explanation:

In this sentence, the pronouns do not stay consistent. It starts about speaking generally about “one,” then switches to a second-person “you.” The corrected sentence reads, "One might try to adopt a baby lion, but one should be prepared for it to become quite ferocious when it grows up."

Example Question #62 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Although you might think that teaching your parrot to curse is a fun idea, one quickly learns that parrots do not know to clean up their language around distinguished company. No error

Possible Answers:

is

No error

their

Although

one

Correct answer:

one

Explanation:

This sentence switches between using the second-person pronoun (“you”) and the more general “one.” It’s better to keep these consistent. The corrected sentence reads, "Although you might think that teaching your parrot to curse is a fun idea, you will quickly learn that parrots do not know to clean up their language around distinguished company."

Example Question #63 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

One’s basic human need for love and acceptance will never overcome your preference to work independentlyNo error

Possible Answers:

need for

will never overcome

independently

No error

One's

Correct answer:

One's

Explanation:

This sentence switches between a general pronoun “one’s” and the second person pronoun “your.” These should remain consistent. The corrected sentence reads: "Your basic human need for love and acceptance will never overcome one’s preference to work independently."

Example Question #236 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

When one's eyes grow heavy with sleep, it's important for you to find a pillow quickly.

Possible Answers:

grow heavy

No error

quickly

it's

you

Correct answer:

you

Explanation:

"You" does not agree with "one's." When using "one" as a pronoun to speak about an assumed general person, remember not to lapse into using the pronoun "you."

Example Question #237 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

One must understand that even if it seems like your life will never be affected, an alien abduction could happen to anyoneNo error

Possible Answers:

your

will never be

must understand

could happen to anyone

No error

Correct answer:

your

Explanation:

This sentence uses “one” and “you” interchangeably. These should stay consistent. The corrected sentence reads, "One must understand that even if it seems like one’s life will never be affected, an alien abduction could happen to anyone."

Example Question #291 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

When deciding what kind of car to buy, you must consider many different aspects of various vehicles, including milage, size, cost, and many other important details which might affect one's decision. No error

Possible Answers:

you

No error

of various vehicles

When

many other

Correct answer:

you

Explanation:

"One" should be used in place of "you" in this sentence. When a setence is referring to a person nonspecifically in reference to an action, "one" should be used because "you" is a more direct pronoun used for talking directly to someone. Plus, "one" is used later in the sentence, and it is not correct to switch to using "one" in place of "you" (or vice-versa) in mid-sentence. So, "you" contains the error.

Example Question #68 : Identifying Pronoun Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Although you have the highest grade in the class, one should still study for the final exam. No error

Possible Answers:

one

have

should

No error

for the final exam

Correct answer:

one

Explanation:

The pronouns in a sentence must agree. If you use "you" to refer to one person, you cannot use "one" to refer to the same person in the same sentence.

Example Question #781 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Whenever you are about to undertake some new task, one should consider whether or not there is time to complete it. No error

Possible Answers:

undertake

one

Whenever

or not

No error

Correct answer:

one

Explanation:

In this sentence, the generic/impersonal pronouns are used to give general advice to anyone rather than some person in particular. Both "you" and "one" are considered appropriate impersonal pronouns, but they must be used consistently for a sentence to be grammatically correct. In the above sentence, either the instance of "you" should be changed to "one" or the instance of "one" should be changed to "you," but only "one" is underlined, so that is the only correct answer.

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