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Example Question #1141 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
If Paula, one of the smartest young women I have ever met can't comprehend what Professor Pyg is talking about, I strongly suspect that no one can. No error
Professor Pyg is talking about,
No error
If Paula,
met can't
no one can.
met can't
Interrupting phrases are subordinate and add information to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being grammatically complete. Such phrases must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas at the beginning and end of the phrase. In the example sentence "one of the smartest young women I have ever met" acts as an interrupting phrase, so the portion of the sentence above that needs to be corrected is, "met can't."
Example Question #1142 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Mithridates commonly known as the Poison King, was a phenomenal enemy of ancient Rome. No error
Mithridates commonly
No error
phenomenal enemy
Poison King,
ancient Rome.
Mithridates commonly
In the example sentence "commonly known as the Poison King" is a grammatically unnecessary (but contextually useful) phrase that must be separated from the clause it interrupts with commas. The sentence above is missing a comma between "Mithridates" and "commonly." The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct and complete.
Example Question #1143 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Pontus, a relatively rich kingdom on the Black Sea is famous for its extraordinary plant life. No error
No error
Pontus, a relatively
kingdom on
its extraordinary
Black Sea is
Black Sea is
The fundamental grammatical structure of the example sentence reads, "Pontus is famous for its extraordinary plant life." "Pontus" is the subject, while "is" functions as the verb. So, we know that the words excluded from this fundamental subject-verb-object structure must be an interrupting phrase, and as such must be separated with commas at the beginning and end of the phrase. The example sentence is missing a comma after "Sea."
Example Question #1144 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Every morning when Kent comes to school he has an apple for his teacher. No error
comes
No error
his teacher.
school he
Every morning
school he
Introductory phrases are subordinate and add information to a sentence. These phrases are not necessary to the sentence being grammatically complete, and thus must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. In this sentence "Every morning when Kent comes to school" acts an introductory clause, and must be punctuated with a coma after "school." The portion of the sentence above that needs to be corrected is, "school he"
Example Question #3651 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
If you don't stop smoking I'm going to be forced to remove you from the train platform. No error
from the train
smoking I'm
If you
No error
be forced
smoking I'm
In the example sentence, "if you don't stop smoking" is clearly a dependent clause. Since this dependent clause comes before the main clause, it is acting here as an introductory phrase and must be punctuated with a comma.
Example Question #3652 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
I think that pork, one of my favorite kinds of meat is incredibly versatile. No error
versatile.
meat is
pork, one
I think
No error
meat is
Interrupting phrases must be separated from the rest of the sentence with commas. Here, the grammatical subject is "pork," this subject is then described in a grammatically irrelevant, but contextually useful, interrupting phrase. Because it is outside of the basic structure of the sentence, the interrupting phrase "one of my favorite kinds of meat" should have one comma at the beginning and one comma at the end.
Example Question #3653 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
My favorite actor of the previous generation, Derek Jacobi is profoundly talented. No error
of the
My favorite
No error
generation, Derek Jacobi is
talented.
generation, Derek Jacobi is
In this sentence "Derek Jacobi" acts as an interrupting appositive phrase, and thus must be enclosed with commas. Here, the subject is first identified as "my favorite actor of the previous generation," and is then renamed with a proper noun. The actors name is important information contextually, but is not fundamental to grammatical structure of the sentence, since the grammatical subject remains "my favorite actor of the previous generation."
Example Question #3654 : Sat Writing
Shortly the windows opened and a strong gust blew all the papers on the desk.
Shortly, the windows opened
Shortly, the windows opening
Shortly the windows opens
Shortly the windows opening
Shortly, the window's opened
Shortly, the windows opened
The underlined portion of the sentence contains just one error. The word "Shortly" is used as an introductory phrase, describing when the action of the sentence took place. Any introductory phrase needs to be set off by a comma. "Shortly, the windows opened" is the best choice to improve the sentence.
Example Question #1 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas For Dependent Clauses
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Although he initially refused to go to the cinema, James finally saw the movie, that his friends had recommended. No error
refused to go to the cinema
No error
had recommended
Although he
movie, that
movie, that
Commas, gramatically speaking, should never be used before or after the word "that." The correct sentence would have: "James finally saw the movie that his friends . . ."
"Had recommended" could be changed to "recommended", for the sake of simplicity, but the comma error is more flagrant.
Example Question #1 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas For Dependent Clauses
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Joey will reluctantly eat broccoli and spinach but his favorite green vegetables are peas and green beans. No error
green beans
No error
reluctantly
are
spinach but
spinach but
The sentence consists of two independent clauses ("Joey will reluctantly eat broccoli and spinach" and "his favorite green vegetables are peas and green beans") joined by a coordinating conjunction, "but." (Other coordinating conjunctions can include "and," "or," "nor," "yet," "so," and "for.") When two independent clauses are joined by a coordinating conjunction, a comma is required after the first clause immediately before the conjunction. The corrected sentence would read, "Joey will reluctantly eat broccoli and spinach, but his favorite green vegetables are peas and green beans."
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