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Example Question #3663 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or words that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may contain no error at all.
The marketing team spent all month designing an advertising campaign, but in the end, the company chose a different and poorly conceived approach that the boss’s son had created on a whim. No error
No error
chose a different and poorly conceived
end,
but
boss’s
but
Since “the marketing team spent all month coming up with an advertising campaign” and “the company chose a different and poorly conceived approach that the boss’s son had created on a whim” are independent clauses (i.e., complete sentences on their own), a comma must be used before the conjunction (“but”) that joins these two independent clauses. “In the end” is a parenthetical or dependent clause, so it must be separated from the rest of the sentence with commas on both sides (before “but” and before “end”).
Example Question #3664 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or words that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may contain no error at all.
Harry Houdini who was born in Budapest, Austria-Hungary, was famous for his death-defying stunts and his unbelievable escape acts. No error
Harry Houdini
No error
stunts and
Budapest,
Austria-Hungary,
Harry Houdini
Here, “Budapest, Austria-Hungary,” is a dependent clause that modifies or describes Houdini, so a comma is needed both before and after the clause. Because dependent clauses contain non-essential information (they can be removed and still leave a complete sentence), they must always be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. Remember, too, that commas are always used between the name of a city and the name of its state or country, as in “Budapest, Austria-Hungary.”
Example Question #3665 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or words that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may contain no error at all.
The racehorse, whose owners were disinterested socialites was beloved by jockeys and trainers alike for its sweet temper. No error
racehorse,
disinterested socialites
its
whose
No error
disinterested socialites
In this sentence, “whose owners were disinterested socialites” is a dependent clause describing the racehorse. As with all dependent clauses, this one can be removed and still leave a grammatically complete sentence, so it must be set apart with commas on both sides.
Example Question #293 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined word or words that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may contain no error at all.
While it would be great if the Argentinian team won the championship I would be happy to see any South American team win. No error
it would be great if
championship
While
to see any
No error
championship
“While it would be great if the Argentinian team won the championship” is a dependent clause, which means that it can be removed from the sentence and still leave a grammatically complete and logical sentence. Because commas are always used to separate a dependent clause from an independent clause, a comma must be placed between “championship” and “I would.”
Example Question #1161 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or words that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may contain no error at all.
No matter what I do, I can’t seem to convince the board of directors that achieving the designer’s vision will be impossible, when considering economies of scale. No error
No matter what I do,
impossible
No error
can’t seem
the designer’s
impossible
“No matter what I do” is a dependent clause, so it must be separated from the rest of the sentence by a comma; however, “when considering economies of scale” is not a dependent clause in this case, so it shouldn’t be preceded by a comma. It is instead part of the preceding independent clause, and it can’t be removed from the sentence without losing some of the main idea.
Example Question #1162 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or words that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may contain no error at all.
Being a weak speller I was not able to score well when it came time to write the inspirational essay; we were given no resources to check our spelling or grammar before we handed in the assignment. No error
to score well
before we handed in
essay;
Being a weak speller
No error
Being a weak speller
“Being a weak speller” is a modifier that describes the narrator of the sentence, and it is a dependent clause. A comma is needed after “speller.” The semicolon is used correctly to separate two independent clauses without a conjunction here.
Example Question #1163 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or words that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may contain no error at all.
The panel of scientists was fascinated by the rare species of tree frog, which was capable of producing toxins to incapacitate or even kill a full-grown horse, human, or cow. No error
frog,
was
full-grown
No error
human,
No error
In this sentence, “which was capable of producing toxins to incapacitate or even kill a full-grown horse, human, or cow” is a dependent clause. In other words, it is non-essential information that can be removed and still leave a complete sentence; therefore, it is correctly separated from the independent clause with a comma. The items in the list are also correctly punctuated with commas.
Example Question #1164 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or words that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may contain no error at all.
Being an unlikely candidate for governor the woman nevertheless charmed voters with her candor, fervency, and sardonic sense of humor. No error
nevertheless
Being an unlikely candidate for governor
candor,
No error
fervency,
Being an unlikely candidate for governor
Here, “Being an unlikely candidate for governor” is a dependent clause. It relies on the independent clause (the rest of the sentence) for meaning, so it should be separated from that independent clause with a comma after “governor.” The list is punctuated correctly with commas here.
Example Question #1165 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or words that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may contain no error at all.
Even with a combination of whiskey, opium, and assistants early amputations were grisly, excruciating procedures that often resulted in infection and death. No error
grisly
assistants
whiskey,
No error
that often resulted in
assistants
Here, “Even with a combination of whiskey, opium, and assistants” is a dependent clause that depends upon the rest of the sentence (“early amputations were grisly, excruciating procedures that often resulted in infection and death”) for its meaning, so it should be separated from that independent clause with a comma after “assistants.”
Example Question #1166 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or words that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may contain no error at all.
Ever since Joachim quit his last job he has been free to pursue his solo jazz career, and he has actually become quite skilled at improvisation. No error
No error
Ever since Joachim quit his last job
quite skilled
career,
pursue
Ever since Joachim quit his last job
“Ever since Joachim quit his last job” is a dependent clause, so it should be separated from the rest of the sentence with a comma. There is also a comma after “career,” as we’re separating two independent clauses with a conjunction (“and”) and therefore we need a comma before that conjunction.
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