SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #212 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The smell of roasting onions permeated in the courtyard by the kitchenNo error

Possible Answers:

No error

The smell of

permeated in

roasting onions

by the kitchen

Correct answer:

permeated in

Explanation:

The verb "permeated" is not typically followed by the preposition "in." The corrected sentence reads, "The smell of roasting onions permeated the courtyard by the kitchen."

Example Question #213 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Public transportation strikes can have serious harmful effects for the local economy. No error

Possible Answers:

for

can have

serious harmful

No error

local

Correct answer:

for

Explanation:

The wrong preposition is used here. Usually we say that something has an effect "on" another thing, not "for." The corrected sentence reads, "Public transportation strikes can have serious harmful effects on the local economy."

Example Question #11 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

What is the reason of the giant, empty box that has been sitting in the living room for the past week? No error

Possible Answers:

reason of

No error

has been sitting

past

for

Correct answer:

reason of

Explanation:

This sentence does not follow the conventions of noun and preposition use. The correct preposition to use after “reason” is “for,” not “of.” The corrected sentence reads: "What is the reason for the giant, empty box that has been sitting in the living room for the past week?"

Example Question #215 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Since she had surgery, Christine has appreciated for the elevator up to her fourth-floor apartment. No error

Possible Answers:

surgery; Christine

No error

her

appreciated for

Since

Correct answer:

appreciated for

Explanation:

This sentence uses an unnecessary preposition. While it is convention to speak about “an appreciation for,” the preposition “for” is not used with the verb “to appreciate.” The corrected sentence reads, "Since she had the surgery, Christine has appreciated the elevator up to her fourth-floor apartment."

Example Question #381 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The roller coaster was old and rickety, and the seatbelts were dangerously frayed; getting in, I felt afraid of my life. No error

Possible Answers:

old and rickety

No error

getting in

dangerously

afraid of

Correct answer:

afraid of

Explanation:

This sentence doesn’t follow the conventions of prepositions in its choice of preposition that follows the verb “afraid.” “Afraid of is very different than “afraid for.” In this case, because the speaker’s life is the thing in danger instead of the speaker's life causing the speaker to feel afraid, “for” is appropriate. The corrected sentence reads, "The roller coaster was old and rickety, and the seatbelts were dangerously frayed; getting in, I felt afraid for my life."

Example Question #212 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The Federalists and the Republicans, the first two political parties of the United States, disagreed with how the Constitution should be interpretedNo error

Possible Answers:

of the United States

political

should be interpreted

with

No error

Correct answer:

with

Explanation:

The wrong preposition is used in "disagreed with." You generally "disagree with" a person or policy, but "disagree over" or "disagree on" an issue. Changing "with" to "over" corrects the sentence's error. The corrected sentence reads "The Federalists and the Republicans, the first two political parties of the United States government, disagreed over how the Constitution should be interpreted."

Example Question #22 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Her father prevented her against dropping out of high schoolNo error

Possible Answers:

prevented her

of high school

Her father

against

No error

Correct answer:

against

Explanation:

The correct phrase is “to prevent someone (or something) from doing something.” 

Example Question #42 : Identifying Errors Involving Commonly Confused Words

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

While small dogs are more vulnerable then large dogs, they also tend to be more aggressive. No error

Possible Answers:

also

No error

While

are more

then

Correct answer:

then

Explanation:

"Then" is used to describe a sequence of events, while "than" is used to compare two subjects. Here, two subjects are being compared: big and small dogs. Therefore, "than" should be used, not "then."

Example Question #223 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Now that I have researched all of the candidates and the issues, I have decided to support for the third party candidate. No error

Possible Answers:

all of the

support for

No error

have decided

and

Correct answer:

support for

Explanation:

In this sentence, the preposition “for” is incorrect. “For” is used after the noun “support,” but not the verb. The corrected sentence reads, "Now that I have researched all of the candidates and the issues, I have decided to support the third party candidate."

Example Question #222 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The presence of a chicken happily pecking at pretzels strewn across her kitchen floor was rather surprising for Margaret. No error

Possible Answers:

strewn

No error

was

surprising for

happily

Correct answer:

surprising for

Explanation:

There is an error in the idiomatic use of prepositions in this sentence. The preposition “to” is more acceptable after “surprising.” The corrected sentence reads: The presence of a chicken happily pecking at pretzels strewn across her kitchen floor was rather surprising to Margaret.

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