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Example Question #12 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The ballerina's exceptional twirling and precise body control left the audience members in awe; her mastery, accomplished through years of intense training, was not lost on even the inexperienced spectators. No error
not lost on
exceptional twirling and precise body control
No error
awe;
mastery,
No error
A semicolon is used to connect two independent clauses. The two clauses separated here by the semicolon are both independent, so the semicolon use is correct.
Example Question #13 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Fire-breathing seems quite foolish and dangerous to an uninformed observer; but any experienced fire-breather knows how to properly minimize the potential risks. No error
properly minimize
any experienced fire-breather knows
quite foolish and dangerous
observer; but
No error
observer; but
This is an incorrect use of a semicolon. A semicolon is used to separate two independent clauses, but the second clause starts with the conjunction "but." In this instance, either a comma should be used instead of a semicolon or the conjunction "but" should be deleted to make the semicolon appropriate.
Example Question #14 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Milwaukee was chosen as the host site for the conference not because of any bias the board members held; but rather because of its central location. No error
its
No error
site
was chosen
held; but
held; but
A semicolon is used to separate two independent clauses, but the second of the clauses here is dependent. The clause that follows the semicolon here could not stand alone as its own sentence, and thus is not an independent clause. The appropriate punctuation to use here would be a comma.
Example Question #15 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
He ran to and from the store; several times. No error
and
;
He ran
times.
No error
;
Semicolons are predominantly used to separate two independent clauses. In the sentence above, the semicolon is incorrect because it is not separating two such clauses. The best way to correct this sentence would be to simply remove the semicolon.
Example Question #16 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
My dad likes to tell a lot of bad jokes; it's quite intolerable. No error
My dad
;
it's
No error
tell
No error
Semicolons are predominantly used to separate two independent clauses. In the sentence above, the semicolon is used correctly. There are no other errors in the example sentence. The verb "tell" is in the correct tense; "it's" is the correct contraction.
Example Question #17 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
I ran to the market; back again in a single afternoon. No error
No error
in
single afternoon
ran
;
;
Semicolons are predominantly used to separate two independent clauses. In the sentence above, the semicolon is incorrect because it is not separating two such clauses. The best way to fix this sentence would be to replace the semicolon with the word "and." The correct version of this sentence would read: "I ran to the market and back again in a single afternoon."
Example Question #18 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
I really love cooking; and baking in the afternoon. No error
baking
afternoon.
;
No error
really
;
Semicolons are predominantly used to separate two independent clauses. In the sentence above, the semicolon is incorrect because it is not separating two such clauses. Semicolons should never be placed in the middle of a clause.
Example Question #19 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Select the underlined portion of the sentence that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The milk wasn't past its listed expiration date; but we threw it out anyway because of a funky odor emanating from the box. No error
No error
date; but
threw
past
its
date; but
A semicolon is used to separate two independent clauses (grammatically complete clauses that could stand on their own as sentences). The second half of this sentence, after the semicolon, is a subordinate and dependent clause (it could not be a legitimate sentence on its own), thus a semicolon is inappropriate here. A comma would be the appropriate choice. "Its" is the correct possessive. The sentence is in the correct tense.
Example Question #20 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Franklin; one of the strongest people I know, can lift extremely heavy weights. No error
Franklin;
strongest
know,
extremely
No error
Franklin;
Semicolons are almost exclusively used to separate two indepenedent clauses, or clauses which may stand as a sentence on their own. As such, the best way to correct the sentence above is to delete the semicolon following the word "Franklin" and replace it with a comma. Note that semicolons are never used to punctuate interrupting phrases, which require a comma on either end.
Example Question #21 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Paul was very frustrated by the lack of progress; Mark was also annoyed. No error
annoyed.
progress; Mark
No error
Paul was
frustrated
No error
Semicolons may be used to separate two independent clauses, or clauses which may stand as a sentence on their own. The other two ways to punctuate independent clauses are with a period or a coordinating conjunction and a comma.
In this sentence the semicolon correctly separates the two independent clauses. The verb tenses are consistent and correct for the situation. As such, the sentence above is correct as it is written.
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