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Example Question #581 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
We had several snacks to choose from; popcorn, chips, chocolate, and ice cream. No error
to choose
from;
several
had
No error
from;
When beginning a list of three or more items following an independent clause, a colon should be used not a semicolon. Semicolons are only used to combine two independent clauses into one sentence.
Example Question #582 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Cindy is generally an outgoing person, however, tonight she hardly said a word. No error
she
word
generally
person,
No error
person,
There should be a semicolon after "person" because the sentence includes two independent clauses. Separating two independent clauses with just a comma creates a comma splice error. Comma splice errors can be fixed by inserting a coordinating conjunction after the comma, replacing the comma with a semicolon, or replacing the comma with a period.
Example Question #583 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The professor was not only known for her oratorical skills; but also for her compassion for students. No error
was
No error
skills;
her
students
skills;
There should be a comma after skills, not a semicolon. A semicolon connects two independent clauses into one sentence. "But also for her compassion for students" cannot stand alone as a sentence.
Example Question #584 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
When I visited Spain with my parents, I really wanted to see four cities; Madrid, Barcelona, Valencia, and Sevilla. No error
visited
No error
wanted
When
cities;
cities;
At the introduction of a list following an independent clause, a colon should be used, not a semicolon. The items in this list do not form an independent clause, and therefore should not be preceded by a semicolon.
Example Question #585 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Juan's grandmother was becoming frail quickly: she was getting thinner by the second. No error
grandmother
quickly:
by
No error
becoming
quickly:
There should be a semicolon after quickly rather than a colon, since there are two independent clauses in the sentence. Two independent clauses should be connected into a compound sentence with a semicolon or a comma and a conjunction.
Example Question #586 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Kinjal drives a Mercedes; Michael drives a Toyota. No error
Mercedes;
drives
No error
Toyota
a
No error
The sentence is correct as written. The semicolon is correctly used to connect two independent clauses into one sentence. A comma and a conjunction, or a period would also have been acceptable options here.
Example Question #587 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
He ate a large meal at breakfast; since he is so big. No error
ate
No error
since
big.
breakfast;
breakfast;
There should be a comma after breakfast instead of a semicolon. "Since he is so big," is not a complete grammatical clause.
Example Question #588 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Kristin despises eating green vegetables; however, her mother keeps insisting they are good for her health. No error
vegetables;
keeps
however,
despises
No error
No error
The sentence is correct and the semicolon is correctly positioned, since it separates two independent clauses. A semicolon is an optional stylistic choice here, separating the clauses with a comma and a coordinating conjunction or a period would be equally correct.
Example Question #589 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
She had two choices at that moment; give up or keep running. No error
moment;
had
choices
or
No error
moment;
The word "moment" should be followed by a colon, not a semicolon. This is because semicolons should only be used to separate two independent clauses that could stand alone as two different sentences, which is not the case here. A colon here would correctly grammatically signal the beginning of the list.
Example Question #94 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; and I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; but I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; though I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; and I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; or I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses; however, they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The sentence above incorrectly places the coordinating conjunction "and" after the semicolon. Replacing the semicolon with a comma, or deleting the coordinating conjunction would both grammatically correct this sentence. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, I need to go to the dry cleaners; I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
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