What I learned in English Class by Olajumoke Oloyede

Olajumoke Oloyedeof APO,AE.'s entry into Varsity Tutor's August 2013 scholarship contest

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What I learned in English Class by Olajumoke Oloyede - August 2013 Scholarship Essay

 
What I Learned in English Class
 
I felt this semester, is the first of many I will endure, it was a successful one. The objective of the course was to make us better writers and I certainly have improved.  I learned what makes a paper good or bad, 
what makes it easier to be an excellent writer.
The manners the class was been held really makes a big difference in my life
 
  However, I felt I should have taken my high school English class more serious. The teacher graded rather leniently, which attributed to my lack of effort. The amount of work required to get an "A" paper in my high School was about equivalent to the work required to get a "C" paper here. It was a very difficult adjustment for me.I went  through high School writing what I now know to be not-so-good papers, but received good grades for them.  Then, I thought they were good because of the grades I 
 
got.  Now, I find myself working over twice as hard for half the grade. 
 
This isn't a completely bad thing, though.  It teaches me that my writing 
 
really wasn't very good.  What I used to think deserved an "A" I now 
 
realize only does deserve a "C."  Now I have to take my writing more 
 
seriously, and try much harder at producing good output.  Also, my goal 
 
isn't to write a paper that will get a good grade.  Now, my goal is to 
 
write better papers.  I write to become a better writer.
 
In this Semester I  have to get at least a B on this paper by putting more effort in my assignments to improve my work i also learned that it is much easier to produce a good piece of writing if 
 
I am kept interested.  By choosing our own topics, rather than have the 
 
teacher give us topics to write on, we often are much more interested in 
 
the subject.  If we are interested in what we are writing about, we tend to 
 
have a better opinion, and we can explain our ideas better.  All of this 
 
helps us produce better papers.  Also, if the writer is interested in the 
 
subject, this interest often translates into the writer making a more 
 
interesting paper, which keeps the reader more interested and gives people 
 
a better opinion of how good of a writer that person really is. 
 
 Finally, I learned that the teacher makes a world of difference. 
 
Throughout high school, my English teachers were boring, monotone, and 
 
seemed unenthusiastic about their work.  they acted like they were better 
 
than the students were.  They approached the class thinking, "I know what 
 
I'm talking about and you don't, so shut up and listen to me."  You, on the 
 
other hand, made the class interesting.  You kept my attention, which is 
 
often hard to do.  You seemed able to relate to us in a friendly way, 
 
rather than as teacher/student.  You seemed to approach the class thinking, 
 
"I know what I'm talking about, but you might too, so please listen to what 
 
I have to say and you can add what you want later."  This approach is much 
 
better.  It causes the students to think.  You made the class fun, while 
 
still keeping it a class, not a game.  When the class is more fun it causes 
 
the students to become better motivated to do well.  This is what most 
 
influenced me during the semester.  If it were just another boring old 
 
English class I wouldn't have accomplished anything. 
 
  
These are the things that I learned throughout the semester.  They are the 
 
things I felt were most important.  Writing to become better at writing, 
 
being able to choose my own topic that interests me, and the luck of having 
 
a good teacher helped most in my improvement.  I only hope to improve more 
 
next semester.  At least I have a better idea of what to expect. 
 
 
 

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